Tuesday, September 20, 2022

The Piper at the Gates of Dawn (Inktober, Tuesday, October 27, 2020)

For Inktober, Tuesday, October 27, 2020. Prompt word: “music.” Tuckerization: Mark Wilson

A reminder that volunteering for tuckerization only means a character in the story shares the participant’s name. Other than that, no other similar characteristics are implied.

 

Photograph in the Public Domain

The Piper at the Gates of Dawn
by Alan Loewen
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

Author’s Note: Yes, I am almost two years behind, but I slog ahead, fulfilling my commitment to write 30 flash fiction pieces for October 2020. I will not stop until I have completed my promise to all the people who desired tuckerization in a Loewen story.

 

The jeep bumped along the rugged road leading up the mountainside. Not that the South Mountain range could be compared to mountains like the Rockies or the Sierras, but in southcentral Pennsylvania, it was the adjective used to describe them.

Mark Wilson steered around a gully that had washed out part of the old, gravel road. Courtesy of Google Maps, he had found a small, isolated mountain pond. It would perfectly serve his purpose.

Next to him in the passenger’s seat sat two large backpacks filled with all that he needed for his project: a tent, food, some light camping gear, some recording equipment, and a Yamaha flute valued more than the Jeep Wrangler he drove. It would take two trips over rocky terrain to get all his equipment to the location, but the exertion would be worth it.

The late September air felt crisp and clean, making the journey to the pond enjoyable. Arriving, he paused and surveyed the area. The forest went directly up to the edge of the water, and the thick detritus of the forest promised a comfortable night in his tent.

The pond was less than an acre in size, and Mark could see no evidence of any presence of other campers or hikers past or present. Birds quietly sang in the trees, and a late-season cricket started announcing the temperature with his chirps. Mark counted twenty-seven chirps in fifteen seconds and added forty. The ambient temperature was a comfortable sixty-seven degrees.

He placed his equipment near a tree and made the return trek to his jeep.

An hour later, Mark set up the small tent and started hooking up his recording instrument to two microphones. Dawn would arrive at 6:30 in the morning, and Mark was determined to be up and ready and catch the background sounds of nature waking up. Back in his studio at home, he would lay tracks of his flute playing over the sounds of wind, birds, and any wildlife he hoped to record. Far away from roads and airports, he hoped to record at least a full hour of the environment free from humanity’s ever-present noise.

That evening, he sat around a small fire drinking tea before sleeping. The moon was full, and the pond glowed with its reflection. Occasionally a small fish would come to the surface to take advantage of an insect’s fatal fall onto the water. Deep in the woods, a green glow revealed a decaying stump succumbing to one of the fungi collectively called foxfire.

Later, as he fell asleep, Mark heard the distant yipping of coyotes and the bark of a lonely fox.

The following day as the east began to glow, Mark uncovered his microphones and began recording. Dawn started with no wind, but the air was filled with bird calls and an occasional splash from the pond, either a fish looking for morning breakfast or a muskrat looking for a meal. The occasional burp of a bullfrog competed with the incessant chirping of last night’s cricket and added more to the morning symphony.

Content, Mark leaned back to enjoy nature’s concert, and after an hour, Mark moved to turn off the recording equipment, delighted for what would now serve as the background of his flute solo.

After a gulp of his cooling coffee, Mark opened up his flute case and lovingly put the parts together. Done, Mark put the flute to his lips and began the first notes of Pachelbel’s Canon in D. Playing for an audience of none, the solo floated over the pond where the trees swallowed it up.

Suddenly to his surprise, his flute was answered by another. He stopped playing to hear the counterpoint notes stop abruptly as well.

Blinking in surprise, wondering if he heard things, Mark again put his flute to his lips and began to play. Immediately, the music across the pond joined in, and, taken by the serendipitous opportunity of being united in a duet, Mark stood and continued his playing.

For an hour, Mark’s tune was pursued by his unseen companion’s artistry, a weird, haunting air that complemented his playing. When Mark stopped, the music continued, and now he had the opportunity to accompany his partner with an improvised melody made up on the spot.

Exhausted, Mark stopped, and the music across the pond concluded within a few moments. “Thank you!” he called, but there was no response. Waiting for a few moments, Mark reluctantly began dismantling his flute, storing it carefully in its case, waiting for the other player to call out or somehow reveal their presence. That was when he realized that, thinking he had turned off his recording device, it was still running. Delighted, he pushed buttons and grinned when he heard the duet that he thought was lost only because he did not know to record it as it was happening.

Mark again listened to the mysterious duet with his invisible partner that evening in his studio. With a smile, he sat back, closed his eyes, and relived that moment’s joy again. The soaring accompaniment brought back memories, and his senses remembered the aromas of the woods, the feel of a bed of forest leaves where he sat, and the vision of the sun reflecting off ripples on the pond.

A knock on the door interrupted his reverie, and Mark opened the door to find Daniel, his friend, with a pizza box and a liter of soda.

Mark smiled. “I’m so glad you’re here,” he said. “You have got to hear this recording I made.”

After telling Daniel the story of his invisible partner, Mark replayed the music, and both men sat spellbound.

“What do you think?” Mark asked.

“That was amazing, especially since the instrument we hear is not a flute.” Daniel restarted the recording. “Listen very carefully.”

Mark listened intently and smiled. “Pan pipes,” he said. “And masterfully played. I’ve never heard pipes played with such range and depth.”

“It’s a pity,” Daniel said, “you don’t know the artist. This is worthy of a release on a recording label. You have to find out who this is and talk to them. See if they’ll agree to release the composition with you.”

The following day was blurred with activity. Once again, Mark examined the area around the pond on Google Maps but found no residence within a reasonable distance. Furthermore, he confirmed that his trip to the pond and the resulting hike was the only realistic path.

The only logical thing to do was to travel back to the pond and see if he could reencounter this fantastic musician.

He emailed Daniel about his plan, and he once again journeyed to the pond the following day.

Two weeks later, Mark’s parents reported him missing. With emails and telephone calls unanswered, his worried parents traveled to his apartment to find it undisturbed, with Mark nowhere to be found.

The police found his jeep in the South Mountain range abandoned near a gravel road with deep ruts, but the vehicle worked perfectly. An intense search by 200 volunteers failed to turn up any sign of the missing man. After five days, the search officially ended.

It was October when Daniel decided to walk the area where it was assumed Mark had disappeared. The sun, still below the horizon, turned the eastern sky into a riot of salmon and pink. Daniel parked his jeep where Mark’s car had been abandoned. Walking up the mountainside, he followed a dimly remembered description of the location Mark had mentioned in his last email.

The sun had just peeped over the horizon when Mark found the pond. He stood at the water’s edge and mourned for his friend.

Within seconds, the sound of a flute floated over the water, and Daniel’s jaw dropped open in shock.

“Mark!” Daniel shouted. “Mark!”

The flute continued as if the player was unaware of the interruption. Within a few minutes, the lone flute was joined by another, creating a haunting duet with the sounds of a forest greeting the morning.

Daniel listened for a few moments longer, mesmerized by the song.

Then, running as fast as the uneven ground would allow, he jogged around the pond to find his friend.

Daniel chased the flute players, but they remained invisible to his eyes. Calling out his friend’s name, the music never stopped, and the players always seemed just a few yards ahead of him behind a tree or boulder.

After a fruitless search, Daniel collapsed near a tree and allowed the music to wash over him. Tears ran down his face, but he did not know if they came from the ethereal hymn that plucked at his heart or the grief that he knew Mark was forever lost.

After a while, the music ended, and the forest was again abandoned to the normal sounds of wood, wind, and its denizens. Daniel struggled to his feet and slowly returned to his car.

Content that Mark still lived though in a plane or dimension he could not see, Daniel slowly drove down the mountainside. He sincerely hoped his friend was happy.

Resigned to the reality that his friend had been spirited away, Daniel never returned, leaving Mark and his unseen partner to greet the dawn with otherworldly music until time ended.


THE END



Friday, August 12, 2022

I Have Seen the Future and the Future Is Diesel, Part 2 (Inktober, Monday, October 26, 2020)

For Inktober, Monday, October 26, 2020. Prompt word: “hide.” Tuckerization: Carol Pelligrino
A reminder that volunteering for tuckerization only means a character in the story shares the participant’s name. Other than that, no other similar characteristics are implied.
I Have Seen the Future and the Future Is Diesel, Part 2
by Alan Loewen
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
(Note: This story is a sequel to I Have Seen the Future and the Future Is Diesel, published in my short story collection, Worlds of Mystery.)
The Ruins

Nurse Pelligrino tried to breathe through her mouth to keep out the ever-present stink of diesel. Here in the Ruins, the smell of diesel mixed with blood, used bed pans, and the various odors of the sick and dying. However, as a nurse, Carol had to leave the surface and do a two-week shift thirteen levels below in an artificial hell where even further, the ever-present hum of the diesel extractors kept the planet working for its masters.

When American scientists found a way to create cheap diesel fuel from elements deep within the earth, an unholy marriage of mechanical engineering, nanotechnology, and affordable fuel collapsed the government to make way for corporations, the true purveyors of power. The Middle East went bankrupt, the dollar soared, pollution went out of control, and life spans dropped. The Age of Diesel reigned supreme.

A robotic nurse’s aide wheeled by, leaving a thin sheen of lubricant on the floor from faulty hydraulics. “Nurse Carol Pelligrino,” its speaker rasped. “Director Manson wishes to see you in his office right away.”

Carol sighed and looked at the clipboard in her hand, listing dozens of patients that needed attention. She shrugged in resignation. They were all used to waiting.

Carol walked into Manson’s office without knocking. He didn’t deserve consideration. True to form, he sat glassy-eyed behind his desk, flying on whatever he could sneak from the pharmacy.

“Director Manson? Director Manson!”

Some form of sentience came to the director’s eyes, and he mumbled something.

Carol leaned closer. “Repeat that,” she ordered.

The director screwed his features in concentration. “Room 744,” he mumbled. “Rebel. They caught him. Roughed him up. Fix him up for …um ... interrogation.”

Carol shook her head, turned on her heels, and left the office. She wondered if this one would be alive when she saw him. With their computerized brains, the so-called Custodians didn’t practice restraint when chasing those who stood against the Corporation Hegemony.

As she entered the room, she first saw the Custodian standing in a cloud of exhaust, its diesel engine purring inside it. An ambulatory ball of metal and hate, it had its weapons ready and pointed at the human on the bed.

“Stand down,” she ordered and was not surprised when the Custodian ignored her.

Amazingly, the man on the bed was conscious. “I’m Nurse Pelligrino,” she said. “I’m going to check you over for injuries.”

The man nodded, pain evident in his eyes and on his features. “I have a broken arm and maybe internal injuries.” He nodded at the Custodian. “Those things aren’t known for their gentleness.”

“I’m going to give you something for your pain,” Carol said. She walked over to a counter and opened it with her handprint. She was surprised to find painkillers in the drawer. Usually, the nurses and doctors permanently stuck working here sold them on the black market.

After the injection and the patient visibly relaxed, Carol took the portable scanner out of her pocket and ran it up and down the man’s body. “You’re lucky,” she said. “Your arm is a greenstick fracture. Your spleen is bruised but not bleeding. What’s your name?”

“Nick Weaver,” the man said.

“And you think being a rebel can solve the world’s problems?” she whispered.

Nick smiled. “If I was the only one, most likely not.”

Carol shook her head. “Gotta love that idealism.” She turned to the Custodian. “I need an InstaSplint for this man’s arm. I have none in this room. I will return.”

Striding down the hallway, she returned to Director Manson’s office and walked in. He lay face forward on his desk, snoring away whatever drug he had taken to ease his misery of presiding over the Ruins.

Fifteen minutes later, Carol walked back into the rebel’s room carrying a box bearing the label InstaSplint. Opening it, she took a plastic wrap out of the box, wrapped it around Nick’s arm, and three minutes later, it had hardened to create support for the fracture.

Carol turned and addressed the Custodian. “I need to access the cabinet behind you.”

The Custodian obediently stepped forward, allowing her to work behind itself. A few minutes later, Carol returned to the bed.

She stood smiling at Nick until the Custodian started a loud clicking. Garbled speech suddenly came out of its speakers while a large puddle of diesel formed on the floor. With a burst of static from its speakers, it slumped forward, obviously inactive.

Carol shook her head. “What a pity it broke down.”

“What did you do?” Nick asked.

Carol laughed. “Little old me? I’m a nurse. How dare you say I did something to a Custodian? That’s rebel talk.”

Her face turned grim. “Now listen carefully. I will leave the room under the pretense of needing different painkillers. That will take about fifteen minutes.

“You will leave this room, turn left and then turn right. Walk right into Director Manson’s office. You have exactly three minutes to relieve him of his lab coat, ID card, and anything else you find interesting. He is sleeping and will not wake for at least a few hours. I made sure.

“You will then use his card to access the elevator to the surface. Nobody will stop you because nobody cares about anything happening in the Ruins.

“You will ditch the coat and ID and then hide. When you see the streets are clear, usually around 10 at night, you will head to the Robert Morris hotel at 10th and Arch. Tell the concierge you need a key for Room 453. Remember that number. The Resistance will help you past there.”

Nick’s look of surprise never left his face. “You’re a member of the Resistance?” he said

“Me? Carol asked. “I’m just a regular nurse doing her bimonthly shift in the Ruins. You have fifteen minutes before I return to this room and raise the alarm about an escaped prisoner taking advantage of a Custodian malfunction. Good luck.”

With that, Carol left the room and never looked back.

There were no repercussions from the rebel’s escape.

This place was, after all, named the Ruins for a reason.

THE END


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Saturday, February 19, 2022

A New Release for February - In Search of the Creators

 

Just in time for 2022, here is February's offering of short stories for the price of only 99¢ US.

When humanity discovered they were alone in the cosmos, they returned to Earth and uplifted their animals, seeding them throughout the Milky Way. They then waited for their creations to evolve and relieve the loneliness of humanity.

But then the humans disappeared.

In Search of the Creators is coupled with Canticle of the Wolf, an SF retelling of the legend of Saint Francis and the wolf of Gubbio.

Enjoy these two parables of humanity's responsibilities when they uplift animals.

And please, if you purchase the eBook, please consider leaving a review.

Amazon US site and it will be available in all foreign Amazon markets on Wednesday, February 23rd if not before.

Monday, January 10, 2022

Patterns: Release of a New Short Story


Amazon has released my newest work for the Kindle eBook Reader: Patterns, a dark urban fantasy.

Ryan Williams won what everybody thought was a Go Board at Walt’s Cards and Games, but when he took it home, he discovered it was something very different. It was a relic from a long-ago past that could alter one's mind and eventually act as a portal to a very dangerous place. And what can one do when an addictive game threatens your sanity as well as your life?
Please consider investing 99¢ in my work and enjoy a tale that you can read over and over again.

All I ask is that if you do purchase any of my work, I would be grateful for a review. Thank you.

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Saturday, September 25, 2021

The Cave (Inktober, Sunday 25, 2020)

For Inktober, October 25, 2020. Prompt word: “buddy.” Tuckerization: Matt Alleman
A reminder that volunteering for tuckerization only means a character in the story shares the participant’s name. Other than that, no other similar characteristics are implied.

 

The Cave


The Cave
by Alan Loewen
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

The quartet stopped in front of the forested hillside and dropped their backpacks with sighs of relief.

The leader looked at the small crevice on the side of the hill with excitement evident on his face. Just wide enough for a man to enter, Matt approached it, holding out his hand. He smiled. “Just feel the breeze coming out of there! This system has to be huge.” Matt pointed at the ground. “No footprints or signs anybody else has been here. We’re going to be the first explorers.”

Brandon grinned. “Good find, Matt.”

Matt had found the crevice a few days ago when walking the woods near his home. The breeze from the gap implied it led to a cave large enough to be affected by the highs and lows of the weather. Contacting his three closest buddies, Brandon, Jared, and Ricker, Matt made them swear to silence as it was evident the cave was as yet undiscovered. This guaranteed pristine formations and rooms and hallways that had never seen the presence of any other explorer.

“Okay, gents,” Matt said. “Hardhats with helmet lights? Extra batteries? Good. Flashlights with extra batteries? Does everybody have at least four light sticks? Ricker, why are you carrying a knife?”

Ricker laughed, took the knife out of its sheath, and spun it expertly in his hand. “You know I never go anywhere without my Spyderco Bow River. We might run into some troglodytes.”

Matt rolled his eyes. “If it snags on a crawl, you’ll just have to leave it behind.”

Jared opened his backpack to reveal five energy bars and a bag of trail mix. “Can’t eat a knife, Ricker.”

Ricker shrugged. “I also brought beef jerky. Homemade. Anyway, like we all planned, we’re only going in for an hour and then turning around and coming straight back.”

Brandon tied his backpack shut. “Yup, one hour in and one hour out and turning around if we discover a technical climb.”

Matt nodded. “That’s right. Okay, light check.”

After being satisfied the helmet lights and flashlights worked, Matt turned to the group. “Okay, I’m first, and I’ll let you three fight it out as to what order you want to follow.”

With that, Matt turned around and, turning sideways, began to squeeze himself into the crevice while carrying his backpack behind him in his left hand. The way was tight but navigable, with a steady breeze blowing into his face. About fifteen feet in, the passage turned to the left and became so close, Matt had to exhale all the air out of his lungs. He pushed himself a few feet further where the passage opened enough to allow him to breathe normally. Behind him, Matt could hear his friends as they followed. “It’s real tight where you make a left turn,” he yelled. His voice echoed ahead of him.

In the light of his helmet, Matt could see the passage ended in a larger space that the light could not penetrate. Excited, Matt forced his way further until the crevice ended up in a much larger room, so large, his light could not reach the far wall. He moved to the side to let Jared, Brandon, and Ricker into the room. The combined light showed walls receding to the left and right into the darkness. The ceiling was a modest eight to ten feet high.

A breeze could be felt coming from ahead. “Okay, let’s be logical about this. Jared and Brandon follow the left wall, and Ricker and I will go to the right. If you find any passageways, mark them.” With that, Matt took out a glow stick, snapped it in half, and shook it until it gleamed with a bright white light. It would remain active for twelve hours illuminating the exit, long enough for a quick explore.

Slowly, Matt and Ricker made their way around the right wall as Jared’s and Brandon’s lights became smaller as they made their way around the cavernous room.

Matt and Ricker had not gone thirty feet before they found the remains of an ancient campfire, small but once a source of light. Now the cold ashes only spoke of a bygone time long before the four explorers had entered the cave.

“What do you think, Matt?” Ricker asked. “Indians?”

Matt nodded. “That would be my guess. I don’t know how old these ashes are, but this area was uninhabited until 15,000 years ago. I can’t believe the ashes are that old. Just don’t touch them. We’ll have to let some archeologists know eventually and let them sift through it all.”

The duo continued to follow the wall, and far across the room, they could see the twinkling lights of their friends. Then, a few minutes later, a glow stick glimmered from far across the room.

“They found a hallway,” Ricker said. Matt nodded in response.

Suddenly Matt and Ricker stopped as a burst of excited chatter came from across the room. The two stopped and tried to listen, but the distance could not carry the conversation.

“Let’s keep going,” Matt said. After a few minutes, Matt could see the far lights continue their exploration as well.

Twenty minutes later, the two groups met neither having encountered any other exits from the room.

“Guys, you are not going to believe what we found?” Jared said.

“A campfire?” Matt asked.

“What?” Brandon asked. “No, but you have got to see this. Come on.”

Matt and Ricker followed the other duo. Ten minutes later, they found themselves staring at the wall next to a large hallway leading into the darkness.

“Pictographs,” Matt said in awe.

“We’ll be famous,” Ricker said. “Have any ever been discovered in a cave?”

Brandon shook his head. “Not that I know of. There are a lot of rocks in streams and rivers, but none in a cave.”

The quartet stared in wonder at the figures carved into the wall.

“This is weird,” Matt said. "Pictographs that I know about are nothing more than symbols. This kind of tells a story.” He pointed at the carvings, crude images of men with spears and clubs fighting what looked like a …

“Is that a dinosaur?” Jared asked.

Matt scrutinized the carving. “No, it can’t be. It’s walking on four legs so I think it may be a cave bear. No way could they be fighting a lizard that big.”

Brandon gestured down the dark unexplored hallway. “Should we?”

With that, the quartet made their way into the stygian darkness, their lights for the first time illuminating cave formations. Flowstone, stalactites, stalagmites, and columns glistened wetly as they reflected back the light.

Ricker turned around to study a column they had walked past. “Um … guys!” he said. “Look at this!”

The rest turned about and mutely stared at the ancient skeleton half concealed in the column that had formed over it.

Matt stared in a combination of awe and wonder. “I cannot even guess how long that’s been laying here. This is a living cave with formations still growing, so I have no idea how long it took for that skeleton to be covered like that.”

“There’s another one over here,” Jared said. The rest turned around to see another skeleton, this one with a shattered rib cage. Next to it lay a stone-headed spear, the wooden handle mostly rotted away.

“I guess some of them didn’t get away from that cave bear,” Jared said.

“Glad those things are extinct,” Ricker muttered, his hand subconsciously dropping to knife sheathed on his belt. “He looked at the rest of the group. “We’re coming up on our hour time limit. What do you say about adding another 30 minutes? Our lights are going strong.”

Matt looked at Jared and Brandon who nodded in agreement. “Okay. Thirty minutes more, then we clear out and notify somebody who can make sense of all this. We’ve already made our mark in history.”

The group continued but hadn’t gotten more than thirty feet when they stopped again with yet another surprise before them. “Is … is that a cave bear?” Brandon asked.

The skeleton was monstrous, twice the size of a man, laying on its right side with several spears around it and two of them penetrating its rib cage. Under it, they could see a complete skeleton of a man, except the skull lay a few feet away from the body.

“Oh, man,” Ricker muttered. “This just keeps getting better and better.”

“Yeah,” Matt said in response. “Just don’t touch anything.”

Jared shook his head. “That is not a skull of a mammal. And those teeth! Look at the front fangs. They’re hollow. This animal was venomous.”

Stunned into silence, the quartet studied the skeleton and then, as one turned down the cavern tunnel and walked further done the corridor.

About forty yards, they stopped in shock at another unexpected surprise. Where the corridor narrowed, a primitive door blocked the way. The wood was at the point of crumbling, and remnants of thick vines littered the cavern floor.

“Now what?” Brandon asked.

Matt chewed his lower lip for a while, lost in thought. “Common sense says we turn around and let the experts handle this, but I have got to see what’s on the other side of that door.”

Carefully, Matt attempted to shine his flashlight through the gaps in the door. Still, the darkness refused to yield any discoveries. So finally, he turned to his companions.

“Okay, let’s take a vote. Who’s for opening the door?”

Three hands were raised. “Okay. Let’s do it.”

As Matt touched the door, it crumbled into dust and fragments. “Well, now we can tell the experts it was already in pieces when we reached this spot.”

The hallway continued into the darkness.

The group had not walked more than twenty yards when suddenly Matt was blinded by a flash of brilliant cobalt blue, and the next thing he knew, he found himself in a rushing torrent of water.

Desperately trying to keep his head above water, the water flowed so fast he could not gain a secure foothold on the bottom of the stream. A bright white light in front of him made him feel disoriented.

Gasping for air, Matt felt himself fall a short distance and plunge into a deep pool. As he struggled for air, he was stunned by the presence of the light, and Matt felt relief that he had clearly exited the cave for the surface.

He made his way toward a stone bank made slippery with algae. Behind him, he heard his friends sputtering and splashing about. Matt turned and grabbed Jared’s hand and pulled him toward the safety of the rocks.

Ricker came to the surface, and Matt pulled him to safety as well. “Where’s Brandon?” he yelled.

Further down the pool, still struggling in the current, Brandon surfaced, gasping for breath. Jared and Matt pushed off the shore and reached Brandon, helping toward more rocks further down the stream. Behind them, the small waterfall they had all tumbled over poured into the pool. The strong current flowing to the far side of the pool ultimately flowed into a …

“Where in the world are we?” Jared asked. 

Hugging the rocks, Ricker made his way to the group. Together, they struggled over the rocks and out of the water.

Soaked, they ignored the discomfort to stare in shocked surprise at the scene before them.

The fast-flowing stream from the pool ran about fifty yards before emptying into a sea that stretched to the horizon. To their right and left, massive cliffs soared into an alien sky composed of bright, roiling clouds that never ceased in their boiling, clearly the source of illumination.

The cliffs curved about the sea and disappeared in the distance, vanishing in the mist.

The shoreline was composed of large trees that swayed in a breeze. Thirty feet away from the breakers, the beach stretched to the right and left in an unbroken vista of glistening black sand.

“Now what?” somebody asked.

Matt turned and stared at his friends in shock, his emotions mirrored in the faces of all three.

He turned and looked at the cataract that spilled out of the cave mouth where they had just escaped. “I don’t know how we can return. That water … the current is just too fast. There is no way we can swim against it. We didn’t carry any pitons or any climbing gear because we weren’t going to climb.”

Brandon dropped to the ground, his head in his hands. “We’ve got to find a way out of here,” he said.

“Listen,” Matt said. “I left a note in our car giving the location of the cave and the time of our return. That’s what I do even when I’m just hiking. So somebody will find the car and come rescue us.”

“What do we do until then?” Ricker asked.

“We survive,” Matt responded.

Thirty minutes later, the group dried out their clothes over a campfire courtesy of Jared’s waterproof Zippo lighter. There was plenty of firewood from the trees, and the presence of a warm fire brought a modicum of feelings of calm and security.

After drying their clothes and the contents of their backpacks, Jared shared his energy bars with the group.

Brandon’s watch had not survived the unexpected swim, but when the rest of the watches said it was time for nightfall, there was no dimming of the clouds overhead.

Curious and careful, Ricker made his way down to the shoreline. Moments later, he ran back to the group. “Better put that fire out right now,” he said.

The group questioned his urgent command until Ricker motioned them down to the shore. There, away from the noise of the water that poured from the cave, they stood in stunned silence, listening.

At some distance away, the quartet heard the faint sound of drums.

“I hope we’re rescued soon,” Matt said. “The sooner, the better.”

+++

Days later, a large, hastily erected tent at the cave’s entrance served as a base of operations for several men and women who bustled about carrying exotic electronics. Occasionally a figure in a hazmat suit would make their way into or out of the cave’s entrance.

A woman entered the tent and stood before a man seated at a table covered with electronic equipment and paper reports.

The seated man looked up. “Yes?”

“We sent a camera on the back of the mobile robot down the hallway past the door. As soon as it goes twenty-three yards, it vanishes in a flash of harmless Cerenkov radiation. And the tether is cleanly severed.”

The seated man sighed and pushed the papers away from him. “So going down the hallway is a one-way trip?”

The woman nodded.

The seated man stood. “Okay. We’ll give up the four men for lost. Seal the cave with concrete and then bury the entrance in dirt and stone. We’ll explore the cave sometime in the future when we have better tech. Until then, all the reports are sealed." He sighed. "I suspect those four men are dead. Whatever happened to them, we can’t help them. Maybe someday, we’ll solve the mystery."

The woman nodded. “Very good, sir. I’ll make sure there are cover stories available for the missing men and the rest of our team. Nobody will ever know the truth.”

THE END



Saturday, August 28, 2021

The Holy Well of Saint Blodeuwedd (Inktober, Saturday, October 24, 2020)

For Inktober, October 24, 2020. Prompt word: “dig.” Tuckerization: Joy Henley
On my honor, I am never doing this again. I’m getting closer to being a year behind on this project. Yet, I confess a cancer diagnosis can throw the proverbial monkey wrench into anything. (No worries. I’m going to be okay.)
A reminder that volunteering for tuckerization only means a character in the story shares the participant’s name. Other than that, no other similar characteristics are implied.

The Holy Well of Saint Blodeuwedd
by Alan Loewen
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The Holy Well of Saint Blodeuwedd


“Everybody, please watch your step but do come a little closer.” The tour guide motioned for the small crowd to join him. At their feet, white granite blocks surrounded a small pool of water. The visitors could see many feet down until sunlight itself could no longer penetrate. “Thank you all for coming and touring the British Museum’s latest archeological discovery. Here in the shadow of Mount Snowden, an obscure entry in an old hagiography revealed the location of the well and hermitage of Saint Blodeuwedd, a heretofore unknown Welsh saint from the 6th century.

“The well before you was the first item we uncovered, easily done as it feeds a small stream and the tiny pond behind you.”

As the tour guide rambled, Joy Henley turned to observe the various faces of the rest of her group from Eastern Nazarene College. Five of them had been lucky enough to be selected for doing a summer overseas course in Wales. Their expressions ranged from fascination to boredom, but all were delighted to be anywhere than the United States for 6 weeks.

One of the group raised a hand. “Yes?” the tour guide asked.

“How deep is the well?”

The tour guide shrugged. “We don’t know yet. We’re mostly interested right now in scouring the area around it for artifacts, but as you can see there is no visible bottom. Our next project is to fully dig out Blodeuwedd’s stone cell, and we may have gotten a lead on her grave. Speaking of her cell, please follow me as that is our next stop.”

As the group carefully walked over the uneven ground to a square of stones not far from the well, Joy felt a tug on her sleeve. Turning to see Deb, her college roommate, Joy whispered a quick, “What’s up.”

Deb pointed at Joy’s chest. “Your necklace popped out of your blouse again. You’re gonna lose that, ya know. I told you not to wear it today.”

Joy grabbed the pendant that had slipped out from where it hung suspended under her blouse. Her fingers ran over the delicate silver filigree of flowers and slipped it back into safety. “I told you I never take it off. It’s a gift from my parents.” Deb rolled her eyes.

The group stopped to hear the guide drone on about Blodeuwedd’s hermitage, a rough hut of fieldstone where people came to hear her wisdom and drink from the holy well. Today only the foundation existed, and some rocks to show where the walls stood.

Now that could be a life I’d like, Joy thought. Here in this quiet. In nature. Just me, God, and a few daring souls willing to travel to talk to me.

Afterward, the group broke up and gathered by the tour bus to eat box lunches purchased back at the hostel.

“Hey, Deb,” Joy said. “You can have my crisps. I want to get some pictures now that the well and hermitage aren’t surrounded by people.”

Deb nodded to busy eating to look up. Quickly Joy went up to the well and began snapping pictures with her disposable Kodak camera.

I wonder if I can take a picture looking straight down the well? That would be a fascinating picture

Carefully, Joy made her way around the mouth of the well looking for a good vantage point. Unfortunately, just as she attempted to frame a shot in the viewfinder, the granite block under her foot shifted, and Joy slipped into the well.

Joy’s last sensation was a panicked sense of incredible cold as she sank into the well's depths.

Three weeks later, archeologists carefully exhumed the stone sarcophagus of Saint Blodeuwedd. Unfortunately, the disappearance of a visiting student from the States had hindered the dig for a few days. That the poor woman had never been found only formed one more mystery near Mount Snowden.

Now she was forgotten as the archeologists and their volunteers celebrated finding the elusive grave. Discovered just a few yards away from where the saint spent her life in holy isolation and meditation, excitement ran high.

With bated breath, they carefully lifted the heavy lid. The body of Saint Blodeuwedd was little more than a skeleton covered with scraps of rough homespun wool. Yet the grave held one shocking surprise. A necklace around the saint’s neck had a pendent of flowers in the form of a delicate silver filigree.