Showing posts with label science fiction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label science fiction. Show all posts

Sunday, August 19, 2018

Rat Hunt: A Story Excerpt

Three days ago, being in somewhat of a funk, I sat down and started writing a story. I had no idea where the story was going because I didn't care. I had no idea who or what my characters were because I just wanted the mental exercise of escape telling myself a story without agenda, deadline, or word count.

The result was a 5,500-word story of Conrad and his very inhuman partner, Darci, working underground with other teams to protect people living above ground from some very nasty critters.

The story is very different from what I normally write. My favorite point of view as a writer is Third Person Limited which means as the narrator, I only know and reveal what one character knows and sees. Rat Hunt is written in First Person.

Also, I like to keep the grittiness down a notch, but Conrad and Darci live in a very messy and violent world. Think Blade Runner, but underground. 

Also, there is an undercurrent of sexual tension in the story, an element that has never been part of anything I have ever written before. Even though my main characters are male (human) and female (definitely not human), the bond between them is one of a partnership born of working together every day in a dangerous job, but they are still two separate genders put together by urgent circumstances.

I was ready to throw this work on the slush pile where it would join other experiments of the past, but I have been challenged to consider publishing this work. I will leave final judgment up to you as you read the opening paragraphs:




ALL RIGHTS RESERVED


The alarm clock interrupted one of my favorite dreams where I walked on a clean sunlit beach and the air was so fresh that I just wanted to inhale its sweetness until my lungs burst. I opened my eyes to a dark room illuminated only by the light of the buzzing alarm clock, the air still so very humid and stale and cold as it always is when you live a hundred feet below the city streets.

With a yawn, I sat up, my feet finding the cold metal floor. Reaching for the bedside lamp, I turned the light on. Across the small room, my partner still lay wrapped in her blanket. The only visible part of her was her tail, gray and hairless, as it spilled out from under the quilt down to the floor. “Darci!” I said. “Wake up. Time for our shift.” I reached over and shook her by her blanket-covered butt. “Get up. I want to eat breakfast.”

With a groan, Darci rolled over and tossed off her blankets.

Gray fur covered her body except for her tail. A genetic fusion of Homo sapiens and Rattus norvegicus, with her shoulder length hair and profile, Darci could be mistaken for a human woman at a distance if you ignored the muzzle, the ears, and the tail. And nobody could deny she made a great partner as we together hunted the vermin that pestered the underground tunnels and subways. What better way to hunt rats than having a partner who is mostly rat herself.

And let's clear up one issue right away. Though Darci's body has a very feminine outline, our relationship is totally platonic. Once within my hearing, a newcomer to the Rat Squad made a rather rude observation about his suspicions about my relationship with Darci. I think they found most of his teeth later. The Sarge busted us both down one pay grade, but I still think it was worth it.

The only real physical contact between Darci and me is once a week when I brush and comb her back where she can't reach, but that is an act of common sense, not intimacy.

C’mon. Darci looks like a rat and I like my lovers human, not humanoid. Not that with this job I have any human lovers. Anyway, that’s why the Rat Squad put us together. We simply make a great team. With over two hundred confirmed kills, only Hinkle’s team has racked up more.

Muttering something I couldn’t make out, Darci sat on the edge of her bed as I reached for my clothes. She stood up, stretched, and scratched her naked backside as she stumbled toward the bathroom. When you’re covered in fur, you don’t need a lot of clothing.

Later in the mess, we joined the rest of the first shift teams and watched the third shift teams come in from their patrols. Gossip and talk were light and that’s always a good sign. It means the third shift didn’t have a lot of incidents.

Conrad and Darci's work environment is not OSHA approved
Oh, and in case you think they are fighting typical rats, they aren't:

We had walked another quarter of a mile when again Darci stopped to sniff the air.

She paused and walked ahead ten yards. A small access tunnel led to the right, just tall enough that we could walk through it by stooping. She waved her furred hand toward it. “I smell death down there,” she said simply.

I unbuckled the eight-cell flashlight from my utility belt as Darci did the same. Shouldering our shotguns, we unholstered the handguns that would be more effective and mobile in the narrow passageway.

We found the solitary rat some thirty feet down the corridor, the stench of death so heavy I could taste it. Darci looked at the corpse dispassionately. “That’s been here a few days,” she said. “I wonder how it died.”

Even in death, the rat looked fearsome, its teeth bared as if it were ready to fight the Grim Reaper itself. Its six-inch long claws were outstretched as if ready for combat. It easily would have stood over me by a good two feet, but it was emaciated, probably no more than three hundred pounds.

“Look how thin it is,” I said. “It probably got kicked out of its swarm or got lost and here is where it died of hunger.”

“Why didn’t any of the other patrols smell it?” Darci asked. “It’s been here for at least a week.”

“None of the other patrols for Center Green have gens. You smelled it because humans couldn’t. Not that we can smell much of anything down here in this sewer of a subway.”

Darci stared at it, shrugged, and turned back toward the tunnel. “It’s dead. Let’s continue.”

Monday, July 9, 2018

In Search of the Creators Released in a New Fred Patten Anthology

During Anthrocon 2018, FurPlanet released its new anthology, Exploring New Places, that contains my short story, In Search of the Creators. Coupled with 18 other short stories, the theme deals with anthropomorphic animals venturing into unknown places.

In Search of the Creators centers on Illatha, an anthropomorphic rabbit, and her crew searching the galaxy for the strange beings that uplifted her ancestors millennia ago before mysteriously disappearing. Exploring another solar system, they discover a planet that shows signs of habitation. Could it be, after fruitless years of searching, Illatha and her crew have finally found the answers to their genesis?

Exploring New Places is not yet available from Amazon, but can be ordered directly from FurPlanet.



Story Excerpt:

Illatha and her crew stayed in silent orbit waiting for orders from Homeworld. A subspace squirt took one week out and back and assuming a few days for the leaders of Homeworld to debate what they should do, a response was expected soon.

Illatha stared at the dots of light that speckled the night side of the planet, each one declaring the presence of a city. Sensors had shown the lights were not electrical in nature, but the glow from fires that appeared to be from natural gas.

One of the lights dimmed slowly and then brightened again. Illatha’s gaze focused on it.

It blinked again, twice in succession in a slow, but steady pattern.

Illatha’s furred brow furrowed in curiosity and concentration.

The light blinked again, three times in succession.

Immediately, the captain’s four-fingered hands flashed over the control board to put her ship in a stationary orbit.

Fascinated, she watched as it blinked five times and then went back and blinked once. And then twice, then three times and then five, cycling back to repeat the pattern of prime numbers in a base ten system.

Fear welled up in Illatha’s heart. They had been spotted.

Contact had been made.

Thursday, October 19, 2017

Blade Runner 2049: A Review

Let me start out by clearly stating that I very much enjoyed Blade Runner 2049 and it is a worthy sequel to the 1982 film.
I can see why the public has panned Blade Runner 2049 and it is not doing well at the theater:
  • The public is tired of dystopia movies.
  • The movie is almost three hours long.
  • You have to pay careful attention to the plot line as it is rather convoluted with a number of significant red herrings.
However, I very much liked it. I thought the acting top notch, the story was great, and the cinematography was amazing.

The story follows a Blade Runner known only as Joe chasing down a rogue Nexus 8 replicant. This is not a spoiler as it is revealed immediately that Joe himself is a Nexus 9 replicant. In the ensuing investigation, Joe and the LAPD discover a body buried on the property that makes an amazing revelation about the Nexus 8s that changes all that was known about replicants.

I did not like the unnecessary nudity and MILD SPOILER ALERT, I thought the bizarre scene where Joe's holographic girlfriend superimposed herself over a "lady of the evening" was simply silly. (to see the script, hold down the right mouse button and run the cursor over the blackened text)

I was not aware the director of Blade Runner 2049 made three short videos to lay the groundwork for the film. I wish I had seen them before viewing the movie. Be aware these videos are NOT for children and the squeamish as they contains scenes of blood and violence. The films are:
  • Black Out 2022 when Nexus 8 replicants create a global EMP in a struggle for freedom.
  • 2036: Nexus Dawn is 14 years later when the ban against creating replicants is lifted opening the door for Nexus 9 models that must obey Asimov's Three Laws.
  • 2048: Nowhere to Run takes place a year before the film introducing one of the characters that appears in the opening scenes.

Friday, September 30, 2016

GUEST EDITORIAL: Why is Christian Science Fiction Generally Such Rubbish?

Why is Christian Science Fiction Generally Such Rubbish?, by Randall Schanze. Originally published on November 9, 2011 on a now defunct host.

Why is Christian SF such junk? Seriously? Ask anybody if they can even think of any Christian SF, and they'll probably only be able to come up with the Left Behind books and maybe CS Lewis' Space Trilogy. But then again, they may not. It's actually comparatively obscure among my fellow Christians. Many of my friends at church have never heard of it, and brother, they love the Chronicles of Narnia.

Understand that I, myself, am a Christian, so I'm not asking this question to be insulting or hurt anyone. I just legitimately want to explore the question of why everyone else in the world does it better than us. I ask some of my fellow Christians this, and I frequently get the reply, "Well, SF is just an atheist thing, anyway."

I bristle at that. I'm a Christian. I write SF (though I don't write Christian Science Fiction. Subtle distinction.) Ergo: it's not exclusively the other team's purview. So how did it get that reputation?

It's such a big genre, you know? Hard to quantify, especially since the level of secularism tends to go back and forth over time. In the 30s it was rigidly secular, but refrained from discussing religion generally in deference to the social norms. In the 50s/60s it suddenly became acceptable to discuss religion, but generally it was avoided except among the trippier authors. Hard SF tended to ignore it, or oppose it. In the 70s/80s, it became pretty anti-Theistic. In the 90s/now, it's mellowed down again.

Just the same, there's not much Christian SF, and what is is generally either pretty old or pretty dreadful. There was a good deal from the 40s/50s that I used to read as a kid, but I haven't seen any of that stuff in decades, and I wouldn't even know where to look for it. From what I recall, it was all geared towards the Hardy Boys level reader. Current Christian SF is by and large just flat-out embarrassingly awful.

I think it's based around fear.

You get these *EXTREMELY* fundamentalist groups (I'm a fundamentalist myself, but these guys are waaaaaaaaaaaaay to the right of me) who get all obsessed with things being "Lawful." For instance, there was this "Christian Science Fiction Writer's Symposium" in Texas about 4 or 5 years back where they gave instructions to aspiring Christian SF writers, and made it clear in no uncertain terms that if you varied from their suggestions in the slightest, you were just basically encouraging evil.

Their rules:
  1. No aliens. Because they don't exist.
  2. No distant-future stories. Because Jesus is coming really soon, and there won't be a distant future.
  3. No space colonization stories. Because then all the nations wouldn't be able to be gathered on earth for the final judgement. (what?! You're saying God can't arrange for people to have a convention? You're saying having a bus ticket is going to confound God? Wow.)
  4. No time travel. Because it's impossible.
  5. No stories about genetic engineering, unless it's portrayed as an evil.
  6. No stories about artificial intelligence, unless it's portrayed as an evil.
  7. No stories about other religions, unless they're portrayed as bad.
  8. No stories about fake made up science fiction religions, as that'll put bad thoughts into people's heads
  9. No stories about irradiated foods, or genetically engineered foods, unless it's portrayed as evil. No, really.
  10. No alternate histories. Because the future is ordained, so how could there be a different past? (That's a little too Calvinistic for me, but, whatever)
  11. No steampunk, because it's trendy, and we don't know what it is.
Well what the heck is left after all that stuff is ruled out? I'm going on memory here, I may have erred on a point or two, but that's the gist.

Attendees were told that they should limit themselves - "Limit" themselves! - to stories about near-future dystopias where Christians are persecuted by an emerging Satanic world government. Now, were this just a boldfaced attempt to knockoff the success of the Left Behind books, well, I don't respect that, but I can at least understand it. Cash is nice. But, no, the speaker seemed pretty clear to me that this was all SF should be allowed to do, and anything else was "Unlawful," and hence evil.

Add to this the standard Christian publishing bans on naturalistic writing, and on principle characters who are or were divorced, drug addicts, promiscuous, believe in evolution, have a seamy past, or are otherwise not ideal, frequently even if they end up getting redeemed as part of the story.

Basically you put all this together, and what you end up with is not fiction, it's propaganda. I'm not interested in that, and I'm going to assume that most of you reading this aren't interested in it either. Presumably this is why, even among Christians, Christian SF remains a very small niche. If you're gonna' preach, don't preach to the choir. It's boring.

My own SF deals with religion quite a lot, but I hesitate to call it "Christian" or "Religious" simply because I find it unseemly to treat God like a fictional character in my stories. It seems disrespectful to me. Despite my restraint, I'm regularly told that my stories are borderline-blasphemous. I don't think they are. I've never said anything bad about God or Jesus or Christianity in any of them. Yeah, I've taken a few potshots at the Pope and Baptist Ministers, but I've also taken potshots at the Dali Lama and Gene Roddenberry. I'm not a huge respecter of institutions or offices or pop culture icons. I'm an equal-opportunity offender there. It's not blasphemous, I'm just kind of a jerk.

Take for instance, one story I wrote where the Rapture happened, and nobody noticed. Turns out there really were only a half dozen or so "Real" Christians, so nobody missed 'em, and the Tribulation - which seemed so awful to John 2000 years ago - was pretty much just a normal day in the life for us. The purpose of the story was basically just an expansion of Jesus' repeated warnings for us to be vigilant. So how is this borderline-blasphemous? Clearly it isn't. So why is it interpreted thus? (See Footnote)

Well, it could be that I wrote it badly, and they didn't get the joke. (Possible. I'm not that good a writer), or more likely it could be that I expressed a fairly common idea in uncommon terms. I made it personal, less arcane, which makes it threatening, and therefore some people assumed I must have been saying something bad. Fear.

I'm not a real science fiction writer, I'm just a hack giving it away for free, but I'm friends with a couple real SF writers, and I'm cordial with several more. I've asked them the question "Why no Christian SF?" They all say the same thing: SF is about exploring what might be, about making allegories, about asking questions, about admitting you don't know everything, and maybe trying to learn a bit. How can you write that for/by people who insist they already know everything worth knowing?

They're right. The "Lawful" movement seems to me to betray a fundamental misunderstanding of what "Fiction" is in the first place. There's a real "suspension of disbelief" problem here. I find that very disturbing. Is Gilligan's Island inherently sinful because it had a brain-transfer episode? Why should I be concerned about an episode of Star Trek that has a brain transfer if I'm not concerned about Gilligan's Island? I mean, they're both fictional, right? They're both equally terrible episodes, though one of them has Vito Scoti in it, which makes it slightly better in my estimation. Isn't it a little silly to be worried about one untrue story and not be worried about another identical untrue story in a different venue?

I think this whole "Lawful" thing misses the point on two levels. Firstly: In Galatians 5:1, Paul says, "It is for freedom that Christ has set us free. Stand firm, then, and do not let yourselves be burdened again by a yoke of slavery." The New Testament actually gives us very few hard-and-fast rules ("Don't drink blood"). Most of it is more along the lines of guiding principles ("Be nice to people, do more than you have to, show mercy, take care of people who need it, etc.") From where I sit, this is deliberate: Christians aren't supposed to operate from legalism, we're supposed to operate from the concept of justice and love and grace that laws are based on. We run on the base code of law, but not Law itself. Thus this whole "Lawful" obsession is an attempt to do just what Paul warned us against. That seems fundamentally misguided to me. (To be fair, Paul is specifically talking about Jewish law here, so what he says may not be applicable equally to my goofy opinions on the whole "Lawful" Christian Science Fiction industry. But I honestly believe it is.)

Secondly: I think this betrays a fundamental misunderstanding of what SF is all about. It has ALWAYS been about speculating about what might be. It has only rarely been about attempting to prognosticate the future in any accurate sense. It is a means for playing out allegories, asking "What if?" or "If this goes on..." or "If we stop this, then what happens?" "War of the Worlds" was not a serious attempt to warn people about an alien invasion that was going to happen in 1897, it was an allegory about British colonialism. It was basically saying "How would you like it if someone did to you what you're doing to Asia?"

Science Fiction is about developing a better sense of who we are, where we come from, where we're going. It's about entertainment. It's about questions. It is, above all, first and foremost, about developing a sense of wonder about God's creation (whether or not one is an Atheist or Christian or a Buddhist writer here is immaterial, it's the wonder that matters), and about engendering a child-like sense of gee-gosh-wow! It's about showing us cool stuff simply because it's cool, and that's justification enough. It's about inspiring us to dare mighty things and learn, and maybe fail, but come back a bit wiser. It's about killing sacred cows, but it's also about discovering which cows really are sacred, and shouldn't be messed with. It is, ultimately, about the greatest of God's creations, the human mind, and how we try to use it to better appreciate all that God has wrought.

Fear shuts all that out, and you just get boring propagandist crap that, frankly, hurts us in the public eye. People who genuinely like SF point at us and laugh, and they're right to do it: We're mostly writing crap. If, however, we wrote good stuff and just trusted our audience to understand the difference between reality and fiction, if we wrote with less of an agenda, we may make inroads with nonbelievers. And even if we don't, we'll end up with some cool art. Which is better than the crap we've got now.

The Bible tells us, however, that the love of Christ, Perfect love, however, drives out all fear.

So: Choose love or fear? For me, my faith in Christ is such that I know I have nothing to fear from imaginary things. I, therefore, choose love.

How 'bout it? You wanna' hide in the cave, jumping at shadows, or you wanna' come out and play with my cool friends and me?

(Footnote - If you'd like to check out my Rapture story and decide for yourself if it's evil or not, you can find it here.)

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Thursday, July 7, 2016

Adrift Off The Great Red Spot, 22°51'23.14"S, 98°49'24.40"W

Io and Jupiter courtesy of NASA


Adrift Off The Great Red Spot, 22°51'23.14"S, 98°49'24.40"W
by Alan Loewen
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED - DO NOT REPOST


"Mayday, mayday! This is Captain Arthur Vinson of the floating refinery, Daphne's Tear. I am adrift 800 kilometers away from the wall of the Great Red Spot, twenty-two degrees, fifty-one minutes, twenty-three point fourteen seconds south and ninety-eight degrees, forty-nine minutes, and twenty-four point forty seconds west. Over."

The only response was the soft hiss of static.

Vinson did not believe in luck, but if he had he would have had to admit he had attracted a very bad surplus of it lately.

Daphne's Tear was a huge nanoKevlar balloon a full kilometer in diameter holding to its underside the refinery and the cramped quarters Vinson called home. As Daphne's Tear drifted through the upper clouds of Jupiter, it scooped up the rich gases of the atmosphere and its refineries turned it into fuel for the energy-starved ships that now transported humanity among the planets.

It was a dangerous job, the annual mortality rates almost a full three percent, but after just a year, Vinson would have enough in his bank account to retire for life to a terraformed Mars with a great view of Olympus Mons.

But now, it looked like he was just going to be just a statistic after all except maybe becoming the first black man to die in Jupiter's atmosphere.

And because of his nonexistent bad luck, a rare upper atmospheric lightning blast had fried Daphne's electronics including his rescue pod. He had cobbled together enough batteries and spare electronics to get the radio working, but so far there had been no response.

To make matters worse, Daphne's Tear now drifted in the jet stream of Jupiter's upper atmosphere toward the wall of the Great Red Spot, an anticyclonic storm that had raged in Jupiter's southern hemisphere for centuries.

He looked out the thick steelglass window to see the wall so very far away yet getting nearer, an angry turmoil of winds and boiling clouds. The 400 kilometer per hour winds would shred Daphne's Tear to small pieces in seconds.

He sent out another Mayday.

And this time he was rewarded with a faint response.

"Daphne's Tear, this is the April Devil. I am seven hundred kilometers from your position, ETA estimated to be six hours. Over."

Vinson breathed a sigh of relief. If he was going to die, at least he wouldn't be alone.

"April Devil, this is Daphne's Tear. Be aware that I am going to impact the wall of the Great Red Spot ETA eight hours. Over"

"Received, Daphne's Tear. We're on our way. Have your escape pod ready for ejection and pick up."

"No can do, April Devil. A rogue bolt wiped out my electronics. I have no escape pod. I repeat, I have no escape pod."

There was a lengthy pause in the response.

"We'll think of something, Daphne's Tear. Be there in six hours and am relaying your Mayday."

Vinson sat back in his chair, his fingers massaging tense temples. He had six hours to think of a way of transferring himself from his ship to the April Devil.

They say time flies when you're having fun. It also flies when the prospect of sudden death rears itself. Other calls from other floating refineries came in but being too far away, all they could do was offer prayers and wishes for good luck.

When the April Devil arrived, the wall of the Great Red Spot was much closer. Only two hundred kilometers away and the lightning bolts, hundreds of kilometers long danced through the boiling clouds, forming a nimbus around each cloud-like feature, each individual bolt equaling hundreds of the lightning bolts ever produced on Earth.

If he was going to die, at least, thank heaven, it would be quick.

But in six hours, he had come up with a solution. It was the solution of a desperate man and desperate men can be fools, but there was no other way.

The April Devil hung beside him four kilometers away.

Vinson clicked on the radio. "This is Captain Vinson. Who do I have the pleasure of addressing?"

"This is Captain Abby Constantine, at your service." The close proximity of the April Devil had removed the hiss from the transmission. The voice was clearly female. "Any idea of how we are going to get you from the Daphne's Tear to over here?"

Vinson took a deep breath. "Your ship has an access tube that goes all the way to the top of the balloon?"

"Yes, it does," Constantine replied. "but how does that help you get from your ship to mine?"

"I'm going to atmo it."

"What? Are you insane?"

Vinson laughed. "Certainly, but listen. Bring the April Devil right under my gondola. I can hold my breath for forty-five seconds, long enough for me to drop down to the airlock on top of your balloon. The outside air pressure is close to cabin pressure. The temp is a balmy five degrees Celsius."

"And if you try to breathe you'll die from lack of oxygen and every exposed body part will be sunburned to the point of almost needing a skin graft. And you'll probably break every bone in your body when you hit my balloon."

"Details, details. I'm a dead man any other way. And I'm not worried about the sunburn. I'm black enough to protect me for a limited time. Let me try it."

A short pause. "Maneuvering now. Give me five minutes."

"I'll be generous. I'll give you ten, but not a second more."

Arthur Vinson looked around the small cubicle he had called home for three months. Sadly, he patted the console. "Sorry, old girl. Sorry it had to end like this."

He made his way to the airlock, ripping the sheet off his small bed. He gave one last look to what he had called home, stepped into the airlock, and cycled it closed behind him.

Looking out the little window, he watched as the April Devil swung underneath him. Below, he could see the target. Right on top of the balloon, an airlock connected to a small needle-like corridor with a ladder that ran straight through the balloon to the gondola below.

And through the thick walls of his own gondola, he could dimly hear the wails of the winds of the approaching Great Red Spot.

Deliberately and slowly, Vinson placed goggles over his eyes, wishing that there had been room in the cramped quarters for an atmospheric suit. However, gondola builders had other ideas than basic safety. There simply was no logical need for having such a bulky item in a gondola where all space was a premium. Anyway, if there was a need to leave the gondola itself for any reason, sometimes even in an escape pod, you were probably dead anyway.

So Vinson hyperventilated his lungs until he felt dizzy. Then quickly making sure his goggles securely protected his eyes, without a moment's further pause, he pushed the escape bar that blew the emergency locks of the outer door open.

He fell toward the April Devil and all he could perceive was a barrage of color and cold and sound and the overwhelming need to breathe. The winds of Jupiter buffeted him, but streaming up around the mass of the April Devil's balloon they slowed his fall just as he hoped they would. Behind him, holding onto it with a death grip, Vinson's bed sheet acted as a fluttering tail to slow his descent even more.

He still approached the other balloon at a frightening speed.

He hit the nanoKevlar surface of the April Devil's balloon with a thud and he felt something snap in his chest, but by grace, he was only a yard away from the airlock. The gamble had worked, but the last card had not yet been drawn.

This close to the surface of the balloon, the ascending winds were quieter, so ignoring the screaming pain in his chest, Vinson let the adrenaline of fear drive him to the airlock on hands and knees.

It was when he had the airlock door open that he lost the strength to hold his breath. With a gasp, Arthur Vinson drew the atmosphere of Jupiter into his lungs and he felt a moment's relief for there was air at last in his lungs.

Unfortunately, its oxygen content was measured in scant molecules per square foot.

And then he noticed the aroma, a delicate presence of roses, the perfume of Jupiter.

And now unconscious, he was not aware of the arms reaching out for him.

* * * *

He awoke to a pair of bright green eyes looking at him with concern. He coughed and decided that was a bad thing, but he couldn't stop.

Everything throbbed with agony, but pain was good. Pain meant he was alive.

"Captain Vinson?"

Breathing deeply, Vinson looked up at his rescuer, a trim lady with green eyes. He wanted to respond, but even the thought of talking simply inspired another coughing jag.

"Please don't try to talk or move. We're just an hour away from one of the Southern platforms. They have a hospital bed all ready for you."

* * * *

Six months later, Arthur Vinson stared out the window of his home just far away from the slopes of Olympus Mons to watch the annual climb of green vegetation up its lower slopes. Each successive year, the green limb climbed just a little higher. Vinson was determined to watch that happen for many, many years. He was hoping to get married, raise some children, and share the wonders of this incredible, new world.

It was good the media had finally left him alone. Humanity's adventures in the Solar System eventually pushed his story down the list to be replaced by other heroes, but Arthur Vinson still had his name in the history books. Not only was he the first man to fly the winds of Jupiter, he had also been the first to breathe its perfume and survive.

THE END

Friday, May 6, 2016

Revelstone 2020: A Cyberpunk Story

I wrote this tale back in the mid 90s for a group of friends. It really was the first story I ever wrote that went over 5,000 words (this one is 8,800 words long). The writing is very dated, but the only change I made from the original story was increase gigabytes to terabytes and changed my reference to a zip drive to a thumb drive. Aside from that, I really like this story. It was fun to write and for me it's a lot of fun to read. Enjoy.



Revelstone 2020
by Alan Loewen
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

With a final mathematical calculation, Ancient Evil broke through the access lockout and stood, grinning malevolently at the private cyberspace plain below him. New York General Hospital bustled with electronic activity. The intruder estimated five minutes before his security blocks eroded and the security detail would be upon him. Cloaked by private security programs he was invisible to the other wanderers in this restricted-access cyberspace, probably just doctors and nurses doing their jobs. Quickly, the haker who called himself Ancient Evil scanned the reports that sped before his eyes. He picked one at random, and studied it carefully.

A detailed report on a 50-year old male, it gave information on his vital statistics and medical history. Presently, the man was in the hospital's intensive care ward with a diagnosis of a diabetic coma. With professional ease, Ancient Evil overrode the security blocks, quadrupled the patient's insulin drip and placed the report back into the data flow.

Quickly, he eased back out into the International Neural Net and sped home.

Ancient Evil did not know the man that he had just killed, but that mattered little to him. He excelled in cyberspace assassination and wanted to keep up his art. With this random murder, Ancient Evil had just claimed his 133rd victim. He reveled in the fact he was the most wanted man on the IntNNet and for six years he had roamed the electronic worlds without fear of capture or identification.

Entering his own space was a tad tricky. To keep out unwanted visitors, he had seven layers of increasing security levels, each triggered with discreet alarms. And he never gave out his address. Unfortunately, the price for his security was a five-second process to gain access to his own electronic front door.

And that was his undoing.

"Hello!" he heard behind him.

He spun around. Behind him a little girl in a bright orange pinafore carrying an oversized lollipop stared up at him shyly, her patent leather shoes gleaming on the cyberspace floor. Ancient Evil cursed to himself. He was cloaked in security programs and nobody should have been able to see him.

"Look," he said, "I don't have time to chat. Leave me your address and we'll talk when I have time to kill." He smiled to himself at his own joke.

The little girl reached out and touched him with her lollipop. With a yell of anger, Ancient Evil jumped back and swore.

"Don't touch me!" he screamed. "Nobody touches me!" He activated his emergency disconnect program, quite happy to pay the price of the massive headache he would have for using it. Nothing happened.

He activated it again. Still nothing.

The little girl's face split open into a demonic grin showing an impossibly large mouthful of three-inch long canines.

Thirty-three million people on the IntNNet heard the screams reverberate through cyberspace.

* * *

Mrs. Grove shambled up the stairs to the third floor apartment where she heard the screams. Having been an apartment supervisor for twenty-eight years she was calloused and experienced enough to investigate before calling the police. It was strange that Mr. Fernhuff would be acting up. He seemed to be such a shy and indisposing person.

There was no answer to her tentative knock on the door, so she unlocked the door with her master key.

She found Isaac Fernhuff slumped in a chair with his VR pads still attached to his temples, his open eyes staring unseeing at his telecommunications computer set. Clothed only in a filthy t-shirt, it hardly covered his three hundred pounds of flab.

Mrs. Grove did not panic. She had seen dead bodies before. She reached for the manual phone set and called the police and the ambulance when the computer screen started flashing an e-mail interrupt. Mrs. Grove stared in puzzlement as the words spread across the screen.

TO: ANCIENT EVIL, it said. TAG. YOU'RE IT.

* * *

The four beings stood in a private section of cyberspace trading information back and forth at blinding speed. Though physically their true human bodies were thousands of miles apart, in cyberspace they had the gift of rapid processing courtesy of direct cranial hookup.

One was a shapeless, black mass, a blob of darkness against the dull blue light of cyberspace. Another was simply a thin man in a business suit wearing unusually thick glasses. The other two were simply a square and a triangle respectively. Some people had other concerns than appearance and ego.

"Well, gentlemen" the blob said, its voice characteristically oily and thick, "I have some proverbial good news and bad news."

The other three waited patiently.

"SATS, " it continued, "has worked to the parameters you hired me to create and it did its job perfectly. It located the correct target out of millions of IntNNet users and successfully terminated its object.

"Our old friend Ancient Evil was in fact a piece of filth working out of crumbling tenement in Boston. I can assure you he will no longer be killing people.

"He changed accounts weekly but pride was his ultimate undoing. And when we discovered his handle, which he refused to change, he was doomed. SATS tracked him down, shut off his emergency termination programs and caused enough neural feedback through his VR equipment to kill him.

"And the bad news?" the thin man asked.

The blob gave an oily sigh. "It appears there was a glitch. Our own assassin program did not self-erase after project completion, and it's now running loose through IntNNet. Evidently, it is somehow convinced that its mission is ongoing."

"Oh, great. Just great," blurted the square. "You're telling us there's an assassination virus running amuck through the Net and you can't turn it off?"

"It's quite all right," the blob retorted. "We're programming worms to track it down and terminate it. It was programmed to kill one person with one handle. Even loose it can do no further damage. That I know for a fact."

The triangle spun on its base. "What if somebody was to use that same handle?"

"Well," the blob said, hesitatingly, "If, and that's a big if, SATS was to meet a person with that handle, it would probably achieve its program objective."

"In other words," the thin man said. "Plain and simple it would kill the user."

The blob paused for a second. "Yes, it would."

* * *

In cyberspace SATS appeared as a plain cube of dull gray. A self-actualized assassination system, it had been programmed too well. And even its creators had no idea what it could do over a prolonged period of time.

In order to fulfill its job, SATS had been given the ability to rewrite its own code. Seeing the plain of cyberspace reach out to what appeared to be infinity, it formulated the immense difficulty of achieving its mission over such a large net.

In microseconds it rewrote its code.

And began to multiply.

* * *

"Computer, full access, voice recognition code 7392."

"Identified Joshua Nozzi." The voice was clear and feminine. "Today is April 1st, 2020. Today you have scheduled a project meeting on IntNNet at 0500 Universal Time, thirty minutes from now. At 0900 you have a meeting with your CPA."

Nozzi sighed and sat down at his desk. His office was sparsely decorated, a common characteristic of people who preferred to spend most of their time allowable in IntNNet.

"Send last minute reminders to Heavy Horse, Nebula, The Hacker and Westley, location codes in the data base. Also, set me a reminder for Revelstone access at 1300."

"Revelstone reminder has been set," the voice replied, "Project member reminders are now sent."

Nozzi spun his chair about, facing a small computer screen. From a desk drawer he took a set of patches connected to wires that joined to a common jack. He plugged the jack into its receptacle near the screen and attached the sticky pads to his temples.

He leaned back, his chair becoming a recliner and closed his eyes.

"Start access," he said.

There was a moment of infinite darkness as the computer synchronized its electrical pulses with Nozzi's brain waves. His body shuddered once, and Nozzi entered his own private area of cyberspace.

Even though his computer was not of the most recent make, its 1000 terabytes of bubble RAM at 250,000 THz was sufficient. If his next project paid off as much as he hoped, he would be able to go up to the next model. He sighed to himself. In fact, his storage system was only equal to twenty times that of the Library of Congress and it was almost filled to capacity.

He entered his home page on the IntNNet.

The large front office was richly decorated with medieval artifacts and prints. The lovely young woman smiled at him and rose from her desk.

"Good morning, Mr. Nozzi," she said. "I have prepared your e-mail. The meeting room is ready and your guests should be arriving shortly."

Nozzi ignored her and walked though the inner door emblazoned with the corporate symbol of Bartasoft. The secretary was only a construct and didn't have feelings except what he programmed.

The inner door opened to an office which appeared to be the main room of a castle. Ancient granite blocks formed the walls upholding the ornately decorated ceiling.

"Create," he ordered, "a meeting table for five, round and composed of darkly stained oak."

The air shimmered and a table with chairs appeared. He ran his finger across its slick surface and marveled once again at the feel of objects in cyberspace. Since 2010, full sensory input had been developed for cyberspace interaction, but he had never gotten used to the fact that cyberspace was hardly distinguishable from reality.

It was still twenty minutes away from his meeting. Nozzi sighed.

"Long sword!" he ordered. Shimmering, it appeared in his hand.

"Opponent, master level," he said.

An animated skeleton appeared, heavily armored. It screamed and swung its broad axe and lunged.

Nozzi feinted, parried and pressed the attack.

* * *

Berek walked down the bustling, massive stone corridor of the main keep that was the center of Revelstone. More than a home page, Revelstone was a popular and well-known node of the IntNNet and Berek was its master, its owner and its caretaker.

The corridor had the impression of stretching into infinity. Everything in cyberspace, Berek was always fond of saying, is bigger than life.

Doors by the thousands branched off from the corridor featuring the home pages of cybernauts who lacked the equipment to have one in their own system. Berek had made a tidy sum by renting out space.

The corridor was filled with thousands of visitors. Demonstrating every shape and size of the human imagination, moving at various speeds depending on their urgency or impatience, they moved in and out of the various doors.

This corridor was one of many that filled the keep. The keep itself, to the virtual eye, lay amidst a green and verdant countryside that Berek called The Land, in honor of an author and his mythos of the previous century.

A page, actually a construct, approached Berek with lightning speed.

"Master," he said, "I wish to report suspicion of viral entry onto home pages 7452, 6399, 0021, 2489, 4127, 4726 ..."

The construct rattled on as Berek's anger grew. The writers of viruses, he had always said, should be hung by a certain part of their anatomy.

"Halt," he said, stopping the construct's recital, "activate anti-viral program FG-5 and notify the owners of infected pages that I'm doing an anti-viral sweep."

"Anti-viral programs AA-1 through HH-7 have been released as per standing orders," the construct replied. "There has been no confirmation of erasure. I now wish to report suspicion of viral entry onto home pages 1289, 8894, 2657, 4569, 6892 ... "

Berek sighed as the recital continued. Leave it up to a human, he had always said, to do a computer's work.

"Looks like," he said aloud to nobody in particular, "I'm going to be doing a little virus hunting."

* * *

Joshua Nozzi, now in the persona of Izon of Bartas, sat at the business table and chatted with those there while the remaining few logged in.

Nebula sat at his right, appearing as a male human dressed in futuristic military gray. The Hacker and Westley were one of the few rebels who did not construct visual personas. They appeared simply as themselves, disdaining personas as unnecessary. Anyway, they always claimed, handles were anonymity enough.

Heavy Horse, late as always, appeared as an overweight, anthropomorphic stallion. He occasionally flickered and monetarily phased out, mostly due to his insistence on using a Macintosh computer as his entry point into cyberspace. Apple had gone bankrupt and out of business fifteen years ago. There was a rumor the Horse also appeared as himself and voicing that suspicion in his presence was a good way to get a rise out of him.

Izon of Bartas differed only from Nozzi's actual appearance in costume only. Dressed in black with a long flowing cape, his only ornament was a Bartasoft symbol on his left breast and a thin saber at his right thigh.

"Gentlemen," he began, "since 1999 Bartasoft has been the forefront of interactive game programming for the Internet and, now, IntNNet. We all have made a tidy sum from royalties and we could rest on our laurels, but because of the ongoing improvements in technology, our potential for greater growth and glory lay ahead.

"One of the biggest problems on interactive gaming has always been the time element. Healthwise, it isn't recommended that people visit cyberspace for more than two hours a day, and our systems shut us out automatically at the end of our two-hour limit.

"However, I have located and purchased the rights to research in Sweden that may lead to a longer time period. At this point, the technology that I now own the rights to, would allow our players to stay in cyberspace for a total of four hours. These are not objective hours, but subjective hours.

"This technology gives a subjective experience of greater time passage due to subjective time compression. Two hours are all that pass in real time, but in virtual time, it's doubled!

"And, now," Izon said, his voice dramatically falling to a conspiratorial whisper, "for the killer. I own full rights to this technology and, theoretically, subjective time can be compressed beyond our wildest dreams.

"It is possible that within one year, people will be able to log onto our game nodes in the morning, and, for all purposes, live out an entire game lifetime before their real-time breakfast!"

The table erupted into comments and questions. Izon motioned once again for silence.

"Reincarnation, the repetitive living of many, many lives, has always been a theological issue of faith in some belief systems. Bartasoft will make it a common reality."

* * *

Berek took a disassembler program he had fashioned in the shape of a scalpel and approached the virus. It hung like a dull gray cube in the lighter gray blur of cyberspace.

It had taken him a long time to find it. An invisible program, he had to raise his personal cyberspace perspective to an increasingly higher level until he found it. As much as he hated the writers of viruses, he admired the beauty of this one. It had hid in the least accessible space of a home page where it simply waited. Berek was determined to find out what it waited for.

No larger than a basketball, Berek spun the cube looking for a programmer's key latch. The cube sported no opening. Oh well, he had always said, a cannon-ball can kill a fly as easily as a fly swatter.

He thrust the scalpel into the cube and cut it apart. Inside its dark interior, Berek marveled at the lines of tight code.

Suddenly, without warning, the code shimmered and twisted as it rewrote itself. The incision slammed shut and the cube hurled itself at Berek shoving him to the gray flat floor.

Suddenly, it sprouted countless metallic spines and began to spin at an increasing rate.

"Emergency disconnect!" Berek screamed once. Nothing happened.

Like a buzz saw, the virus tore him apart.

* * *

"Finally," Izon said to his team, "I'm going to be bringing two independents into the project, Panther and Frozen Shade for some specific project work.

"In order for my office to keep track of expenses when working on this project, your access code is AA4367D and your handle will be the working title of the game. So from here on out, sign on as Ancient Evil.

"You all have your responsibilities, so starting in three hours, let's all get to work."

* * *

Berek stepped down from the pedestal and stared with horror at the mangled Berek-construct he had created to dismantle the virus. The virus had once again formed a dull-gray cube floating one meter above the floor.

No fool and experienced in the ways of viruses, Berek knew that sometimes virus writers put nasty surprises inside for people who wanted to dismantle them.

Berek shook his head in disbelief. In cyberspace it was impossible to die or to be killed. Even if it was possible to feel pain, and some of the virtual reality combat systems did have pain stimuli programmed into them, eventually you would black out and come to in front of your computer system. But it was impossible for a person to die. At least, Berek corrected himself, up until now.

And this little beauty was spreading itself through the millions of home pages on the IntNNet.

This is too big for me, he thought.

He disconnected himself from cyberspace and mused for awhile in front of his system. The Berek-construct had downloaded what code it had seen and Berek booted it up and scrolled it through his system.

Berek softly swore to himself. The code was written in Patton-G. The only people who played with that was U.S. military.

"Oh," Berek said out loud to nobody in particular, "We're in deep weeds now."

* * *

Due to the action of President Al Gore in A.D. 2002, all U.S. governmental nodes on the IntNNet were to be staffed by actual human beings and not constructs. This not only made the governmental nodes bulky and unmanageable, but because people could only stay in cyberspace for two hours for every twenty-four, it swelled the government payroll to the largest in history.

Thelma Bottoms had worked as a secretary for the Library of Congress as long as she could remember. She fondly remembered the good old days of the manual typewriters and hated cyberspace, cybernauts and anything more complicated than an abacus.

She had seen visitors to the Library of Congress assume many forms, and the anthropomorphic horse in front of her was not the strangest. At least he wore clothes.

"I need to search all the areas of the Library of Congress for copyrights on several graphics, computer routines, subroutines and plot ideas," he explained for the fifth time.

"And I'm telling you that the process could take days," Bottoms replied again for the same amount of times. "We have over one hundred thousand infopages each listing ten areas of the expanded Dewey cataloguing system." She gave him her practiced smile. "We could do the search for you for only one thousand dollars."

"No thank you," the horse replied and grimaced back showing rows of white square equine teeth.

"Very well," Bottoms sighed. "Your account number?"

"AA4367D," the horse said.

"Handle?"

"Ancient Evil."

Bottoms shook her head at the impertinence and released the information unlock command to all one hundred thousand infopages at once.

Cyberspace was suddenly filled with the sound of what for all purposes mimicked an angry beehive.

Motes, the size of a pinhead but glowing with a bright green nimbus, streamed out of the one hundred thousand infopages and headed straight for the horse who stared open-mouthed in shock.

"What the ..." Bottoms started to say, when suddenly the horse was engulfed in motes.

The horse began to jump around swatting at the bright lights like a man would swat at a swarm of attacking bees.

He began to scream. "Emergency disconnect!" he yelled over and over. Nothing happened.

The motes penetrated his nose, mouth and ears. "Emergency disconnect! Emergency disconnect!"

Once inside, the motes began to swell to the size of golf balls. The anthropomorphic horse began to expand like a balloon.

Bottoms joined in with his screams.

The horse exploded spraying large motes everywhere.

As quickly as they came, the motes disappeared back into the home pages.

Bottoms continued to scream.

* * *

Jacob Mattock swore and pounded his fists against the wall while his subordinate tried to calm him down. The room was a computer installation at Fort Ritchie where twenty computer programmers sat attached to their IntNNet systems. To the man, they were all dead.

Col. Tony Marks walked in with three aides in tow and stared at the twenty programmers. Except for the expressions on their faces, they simply looked like they were asleep. That is, if men slept with their eyes open.

Mattocks spun around and saw the colonel. "You!" he screamed. He ran up to Marks and shook his fists in his face. "Your bloody monster killed every one of my men! MY MEN!" he screamed.

The colonel simply glared, ramrod straight.

"Explain," he said quietly.

"You!" Mattock sputtered, "You made it intelligent. It knew that when it didn't self-terminate we'd come looking for it." He motioned to the room with a sweep of his arm. "So it decided to come for us first. And now it's loose on the IntNNet and the only people with the skill to stop it are dead!"

* * *

Panther roamed the wild jungles of her home page cursing as loud as she could. The sensory node on her computer had crisped out again and now her experience on the IntNNet was limited to a mere four senses.

Unable to feel anything, she felt like she had been given a full body dose of Novocaine.

She jumped from moss-covered limb to another, her supple feline body rippling like water as she bounded from tree to tree. She was hunting and though she could not feel the experience, she could smell her prey.

Following the scent, she bounded effortlessly into a tree and gazed out into the open meadow. The deer-construct grazed among the wildflowers oblivious to the green cat's-eyes that peered down on him from the forest's edge. Panther watched and waited for the precise moment, her tail twitching in spite of herself.

The deer, knowing as if with a sixth sense that something was up, was starting to feel skittish. At odd moments it would jerk its head up and peer around nervously as if aware of the eyes that were focused on it. Slowly, it started to move toward the tree where Panther waited patiently.

Within moments the deer had come within range and with a scream, Panther lunged from the tree and gave chase. The deer jumped and ran toward the far side of the clearing, but Panther was on it in moments.

Her teeth and claws, actually disassembler programs, tore the construct apart. Panther roared her success over the body of her kill.

As she stood over the body of the deer, the meadow swirled like an artist's watercolor in the rain. Fun was fun, but she needed money for a new sensory node and Joshua's freelance work request could not have come at a better time. The meadow congealed and became a sparsely outfitted research node. Retaining her panther form, she loped over to one of the viewing nodes and punched in the access code and handle Joshua had sent her.

Within micro-seconds she had access to the marketing web and began scanning the polls for popular gaming plot lines. Joshua wanted her to come up with a plot line that would sell and that meant seeing what plot lines the polls said people desired. Thank goodness, she thought to herself, the cowboy vampires of Dallas, Texas craze was over.

She caught movement out of her right eye and spun around by instinct. Another panther, a mirror image of herself, lunged on her, knocking her over and began to shred her with its claws and teeth.

"Emergency disconnect," Panther screamed. Nothing happened.

She could sense her form disintegrating under the other panther's assault, but because of her lack of virtual feeling she could not sense what she was sure would be a painful experience.

Anger welled up and her emotions made the the room appear to glow red.

With a scream of rage she struck out at the attacking form in a blur of claws and teeth. In seconds, the shredded form of her attacker lay mangled at her feet.

Reconstruction programs began putting Panther's form back together.

Panther studied her attacker carefully. Suddenly, she swore and lashed out at it again. "You're a stinking virus," she screamed. "You're just a program!"

Slowly, the corpse at her feet also began to reassemble itself. It opened one baleful eye and glared at her.

"You want another go 'round?" she asked. "Sounds fine to me." With a roar of fury she jumped on her twin and began shredding it into 1's and 0's.

* * *

Adolph Hitler looked askance at Berek and the men surrounding him. At Hitler's feet lay over thirty other mangled duplicates of the German dictator while the viral cube slowly hung in cyberspace.

Berek motioned with one hand and the construct reluctantly approached the virus.

"I am Ancient Evil," Hitler said. With a sudden hum the virus turned into a buzz saw and ripped apart Adolph Hitler Construct Number 37 before it even had a chance to scream.

Immediately, the virus assumed its cubic form.

Berek turned and looked at his companions and raised one eyebrow in question.

"We have now recovered about fifty-five percent of the original code," Albert Einstein said.

R. Austin Smith, inventor of the programming language Patton-G sadly shook his head while Bill Gates stood silently in mute thought. They were all constructs.

"I'm stunned at how badly written it is," Smith said. "I could streamline it by at least three tenths of a percent just from what I've seen."

Berek snorted in disgust. "I'm not interested in making it better. I want to eradicate the thing."

Bill Gates stared at the carnage of dead Adolph Hitler constructs and shrugged his shoulders. "We'll understand more when we have the entire code in front of us. Shall we do it again?"

Berek shrugged and called into existence Adolph Hitler Construct Number 38.

* * *

"I'm sorry, Mr. Nozzi," the secretary said, her perennial smile on her face, "Neither Mr. Heavy Horse nor Mr. Frozen Shade are answering your calls."

Joshua angrily shook his head, "What a bunch of losers, Late again on an important task."

"Should I tell them so?" the secretary asked.

"No!" barked Joshua. He paused for a moment in thought. "Belay that. Make that a yes."

"Will do," came the cheery response. "There is a call waiting for you in your office from Nebula. Do you wish to take it?"

Joshua shrugged and walked into his office and cued his virtual video-phone. The screen phased into blurred lines that focused into Nebula's concerned face.

"Bad news, amigo," he said. "I can't get a rise out of Westley or the Hacker. They were supposed to get their work to me just a few minutes ago and I can't find them anywhere."

Joshua hit the edge of the table with his hand in anger. "I can't get squat out of the Horse or Shade either," he replied. "What's going on?"

Nebula shrugged. "That's not important now. We've got five hours to get this program up and running before the finances start screaming. I'll come over to your office and we'll get this in the bag." Nebula cued off without the usual pleasantries.

Three minutes later, a pleasant tone sounded and Joshua walked out into the vestibule where Nebula stood in his traditional military gray. "Any word from the others?" he asked.

Joshua shook his head in disgust. "Not a peep. There had better be a real emergency if they want to retain partnership."

Nebula laughed grimly. "The only excuse I'll accept is if they're dead."

Joshua laughed and turned to his secretary-construct. "We're going to have to get a lot of work done in my office. I want no disturbances at all for the next five hours unless the financial backers call. Save us some time and log on for us."

The secretary smiled prettily. Her fingers danced over the keyboard. "That, sir, is account number AA4367D with the handle, Ancient Evil. Confirmed?"

Joshua nodded his agreement. The secretary's fingers danced over the keyboard in a blur.

"Entered, sir," she said coyly.

"Joshua," Nebula said with a note of urgency in his voice. "What's that?"

A small mote, the size of a pinhead but glowing with a bright green nimbus floated above the secretary who continued to smile prettily, ignoring the anomaly above her head. Suddenly, the mote swooped over the secretary and entered her right nostril.

The secretary sat there still smiling as if everyday glowing pieces of dust flew up her nose.

"Sir," she said, "I believe there may be a problem."

Joshua and Nebula stared at her perplexed.

Seductively, the secretary climbed up on the desk and kneeling, kissed the tip of her finger. Smiling she pressed it to Joshua's cheek and giggled.

"Tag," she said. "You're it."

Her features began to melt and blur. Stunned, Nebula and Joshua backpedaled away from what was quickly becoming a shapeless mass.

"Is this a joke?" Joshua asked looking quickly at Nebula. "If this is a virus infection, my virus detectors should have caught it."

The gray mass quickly jerked into the shape of a nightmare with fangs and teeth and sprang at Joshua. With a cry of alarm, Nebula blocked the attack with his shoulder sending the thing careening into the wall.

Grabbing his friend, he practically threw Joshua into his office and slammed the door in the face of the charging monstrosity. The door bulged and shuddered on its hinges, but the security file held.

Behind the door they could the unearthly screams of the creature as it tried to breach the security door.

Nebula looked at Joshua in shock. "I have to question your taste in women," he said.

Again the door bulged. "Will that hold?" he asked.

"It's a level four security door," Joshua said. "Let's jack out of here and find out what's going on."

"Sounds good to me, friend. Disconnect."

Nothing happened.Nebula looked at his friend with a worried smile.

"Ah " he said. "Emergency disconnect?" Again, nothing.

"This is turning into a very bad joke," Nebula said, worried.

Joshua's attempts to disconnect were also met with failure.

At that moment, the video screen on the office desk chimed. The motes on the screen blurred into the face of Berek.

"Hello, Joshua," he said. "I got some bad news for you. I think your life may be in danger."

* * *

"And," Berek said in closing, three minutes later, "when I realized it was an assassin program designed to go after anybody with the handle of Ancient Evil, I did a net-wide handle search and came up with two hits. Some guy named Isaac Fernhuff, now deceased, and you.

"So, that's about it. You can't jack out because it destroyed your disconnect routines when it touches you or you touch it. And it won't stop until it kills you."

"Not much good news there. Berek," Nebula sighed. "Any solution?"

Berek shook his head in the negative. "I'm still working on it. It took me forever just to break the program down into readable code.

"What I'm doing now is contacting the police and I'll have them get into your homes for manual disconnect. How long will your door hold?"

Joshua looked at the door. The monster that used to be his secretary had broken a three-inch hole in the door and was continuing its efforts to erode the security code that kept it from reaching its prey. “Minutes?” he said.

"Then I'll get moving," Berek said. "Good luck!" The video screen blinked off. Immediately, the video screen chimed again. The angry face of Panther glared out at them from the screen.

Some jerk," she said before Joshua could say anything, "just tried to cause me problems with a virus program."

Joshua tried to ignore the demonic growls from behind his office door and sat at the desk while Nebula peered over his shoulder.

"Panther," he asked. "Did you log on anywhere with our group handle?"

"Yes," Panther said petulantly. "And then this virus tried to short circuit me."

"Panther, listen," Joshua said urgently. "How did you survive it?"

Panther glared at him in anger. "What the heck are you talking about?" she said. "It's just a virus program."

"No," Joshua said, "it's not. Listen. I seriously suspect that Horse, Shade, Westley and Hacker are dead.

"Now it's very important. How did you survive?"

Panther paused in thought and shrugged her shoulders. "I dunno," she said. "I just tore it into shreds. It tried to attack me, but my sensory input is toast. I couldn't feel a thing."

Nebula and Joshua looked at each other and smiled.

"Hey, Panther," Joshua asked. "Want to give it a go on another one that's right outside my door?"

* * *

The hole in Joshua's security door had been expanded to about a foot in diameter. The thing that had once been his sycophantic secretary was now actually chewing on the edges of the hole to make it larger.

"You know, Josh," Nebula said dryly, "You may want to do something about this."

Joshua wearily scratched his head. He had just attempted to solve the problem with a fifth sword which was in actuality a dissembler program, but the virus was able to reconstruct its wounds at blazing speed. "If you have any ideas, you'll find me quite open to discussion."

Suddenly the door ruptured and, roaring its triumph, the creature shredded the last remains of the security door. The two men ran behind the virtual desk knowing there was neither retreat nor attack.

"Listen," Nebula said, "It can only deal with one of us. Whoever it attacks first, the other needs to make a run for it."

Joshua opened his mouth to comment when the creature roared and crouched to spring. Suddenly, two large clawed arms reached through the shattered door and, wrapping themselves around the beast, pulled it back into the office waiting room.

The screams of an angry panther split the air.

"Cavalry to the rescue," yelled Joshua. Running to the door they saw Panther and the secretary deeply engrossed in shredding each other to bits.

"I must confess that I do love a catfight," Nebula said with a grin.

A swipe of a claw and a large fragment of the secretary arced across the air and brushed against Nebula. He screamed and clutched his arm which began to melt and run. Joshua grabbed him and pulled him back into the office out of harm's way.

Nebula clutched his arm and cursed. "I've never felt such pain," he moaned.

"Your reconstruction programs must have been wiped," Joshua said. "Your arm isn't repairing itself."

"The way it feels," Nebula replied. "I'll bet I have a corresponding wound in reality." He moaned again. "I can hardly wait to get my hands on the byte wipe that designed this one."

The screaming stopped. With growing tension, Nebula and Joshua braced themselves to see who walked through the door first.

Shredded and fragmented, its reconstruction program unable to deal with the massive damage, the mutated secretary lurched through the door, stumbling and holding on to the wall for support. With one glaring eye it scanned the room until it saw Nebula and Joshua staring back at it in horror.

With a howl, it crouched and sprung with blurring speed.

And crumpled in on itself in mid-spring.

Rolling out of the way of the fragments, Nebula stood and ran for the door first where Panther's persona was slowly repairing itself.

"She ripped off all my limbs," Panther sputtered in anger from the floor. "It takes a while for these programs to reconstruct."

Joshua came to the office door and sighed with relief to see Panther's ragged form slowly oozing back to normal.

"Thank goodness you're okay," he said. Suddenly, his image sputtered and he disappeared from view.

"What's going on!" Panther yelled in dismay.

Nebula calmed her with a wave of his hand. "Not to worry. Berek called the police to break into our houses for a manual override. They finally got to him."

He smiled at Panther when suddenly his own image sputtered and disappeared.

"Great," Panther muttered to herself. "Leave the woman to do all the clean up."

* * *

Two days later, Panther, Berek, Joshua and Nebula stood on a vast cyberspatial plane that stretched out before them as far as the eye could see. In the last 48 hours, rumors of the virus were starting to spread, but the U.S. government steadfastly declared that it would never involve itself in such a rogue misuse of the IntNNet and insisted that Japanese terrorists screaming for independence from the U.S. were really to blame.

"Institute Reverse Charge Program," Berek said to the open air.

Aside from the sky turning from slate gray to rose, there was no other change or movement. The four stared at each other in silence.

"Did it work?" asked Panther, breaking the silence. "Are we glorified bug zappers now?"

Berek shrugged. "Only one way to find out," he said. "Institute Adolph Hitler Construct Number 124." Immediately the little German dictator appeared.

"Attack the cat," Berek ordered.

The despot raised his puny fists and charged Panther. The nanosecond his fists touched her fur he burst into incandescent flame and disappeared.

"Don't ever call me a cat again," Panther said menacingly. Berek ignored her.

"Institute Far Call Program," he ordered. The sky deepened to coral.

"Right now," Berek informed the group. "My program is informing every mailbox on the IntNNet that a person using the handle Ancient Evil is resident in this location. In one minute, every assassin virus will be paying us a visit."

"How many do you estimate there are?" Joshua asked.

Berek shrugged. "It's a rough estimate, but I'd say at least 20 billion."

"Did you say 20 billion!" Nebula gasped. Berek nodded.

"Hmm," Panther mused. "Four of us to 20 billion of them. I consider them fair odds."

"Well, that's good," Berek responded dryly, "'Cause here comes the first wave."

* * *

The plain raged with incandescent light as the assassin viruses hurled themselves against the four. Berek's program, carefully inserted into each persona, returned to the attacker the same amount of discharge it used as its weapon. And since the viruses attacked by the tens of thousands each second, the reverse charge blasted not only the assassins, but also did dramatic rearrangement to the cyberspatial landscape. Various IntNNet nodes fried and bubbled as cheap surge protectors gave way.

Aside from Panther, all stood immobile, taking, in their own way, the enjoyment of being successful against a weapon their own government could not control. Panther on the other hand, did not wait for the viruses to attack, but gleefully met them in mid-air with claws outstretched and roars of sheer joy for the kill.

Three hours later the attack dwindled to a trickle. Ignoring the final hundreds of viruses blowing themselves to oblivion in their programmed design to kill, the four congratulated each other on a job well done.

"I'm glad this is over," Nebula said. "I feel like I'm been in a sensory deprivation tank."

"Sorry," Berek replied, "but in order for my program to be effective I did have to reduce the level of sensory input you would normally feel."

Panther stretched and giggled. "That was the most fun I've had in some time." She sighed. "What a pity it's all over."

In the meantime the attacking motes had finally dissipated. Aside from one or two latecomers, the blasted landscape was clear of virus and the resulting explosions.

"Sort of like the apocalypse," quipped Joshua. "Except not as messy."

Suddenly the entire landscape shuddered. The four warriors looked at each other in surprise.

"What was that?" Panther asked. "An earthquake? Here?"

Again, the landscape shuddered.

Berek motioned with his hand and a hoop of light appeared in the air. Formulas and cryptic signs flashed on the impromptu screen it formed.

"Interesting," Berek said, his eyes scanning the information as it scanned up the screen.

"Well?" asked Joshua.

"It seems that the viruses we killed were miniature copies of the original," Berek said. "Looks like the original is coming for a visit."

Again the ground shuddered.

Berek looked worried. "This original is highly intelligent. It's not going to fall for the same trick its children did. I think we have something to be concerned about."

"We could jack out," Nebula said.

The four looked at each other in mute silence.

"No," Berek said finally. "I plan on seeing this through."

The other three nodded in mutual agreement.

"Something's coming!" screamed Panther.

A thunderhead loomed on the horizon and approached rapidly. Bolts of electricity left bright images on the retina as they struck the ground with incredible ferocity. Each bolt blasted huge chucks out of the landscape making the ground shudder with the violent attack.

Joshua sighed. "If I get through this with half my brain intact I plan on writing a nasty letter to my senator."

Berek spoke to the I/O hoop he had created through a blur of arcane programming words. Out of thin air, four slim belts of shimmering material appeared. Quickly he grabbed them and distributed them to Panther, Nebula and Joshua.

"These may not be able to protect you one hundred percent, but they're the best I can come up with at the moment. Put them on."

Berek looked at the approaching storm and shuddered as a funnel cloud, miles in diameter, roared out and struck the ground with incredible fury.

"I'll wager," Joshua said, "that twister is the biggest dissembler program ever seen." The wind kicked up to a piercing howl and it took great concentration to remain in one place. "That thing will tear us to bits!"

"It may have picked the attack," Berek screamed above the rising gale, "but we'll pick the arena.

"Joshua? What's the command code for your Anuinn game?"

With a smile, Joshua spoke a word of command. The landscape melted along with the I/O hoop.

The four found themselves in a massive ancient keep composed of solid blocks of jet black granite. The interior was lit by smoky tapers that flared and guttered on the walls.

"This is great!" Nebula said. "I know this place as if it were my own home. There's no way this thing can find us."

"Below us," Joshua explained, "is a dungeon with two hundred miles of corridors and rooms and one nasty surprise if our friend decides to play."

Outside the wind howled and raged, but the keep, written as a read-only program, remained inviolate.

However, the door was not. With a shudder, it collapsed under the massive bulk of a large dragon. Its scream roared through the keep.

"Follow me," Joshua commanded. The three rushed after him as he ran down a narrow staircase.

The stairs opened into a small hallway with many exits and entrances. Joshua, having designed the dungeon brick by brick, knew his own creation better than Nebula who had play-tested Anuinn for countless hours.

"This way" Joshua ordered. "We can make a stand in the Hall of Silence."

There was a roar and the four spun around to face their attacker. Like gray vomit, a large amorphous ball of slime spewed out of the staircase they had just exited. Eyes and fanged mouths bubbled into existence on the mucous-covered surface.

With a savage cry of rage, Panther sprang with claws outstretched.

"No!" screamed Berek. The feline hit the ooze and with claws flashing attempted to rip its code to shreds. With a convulsive heave the ooze covered Panther. There was the sound of a sharp explosion from inside its massive bulk and the sickly-sweet odor of ozone.

"Run!" Berek yelled again. "She's lost to us."

They turned and fled down the corridor, the amorphous creature in close pursuit.

"This way!" yelled Joshua. The trio ran into a small alcove. A concealed door slammed shut behind them temporarily preventing the pursuing monstrosity from further chase.

Berek and Nebula cried out in alarm when spikes sprang out from the walls. With a slow grinding noise, the walls began to draw closer.

"One moment," Joshua said, searching the non-moving wall with his hands. "Ah! Here it is!" He pressed hard and with a sharp click he depressed a section of the wall. The spiked walls stopped moving and the far wall slowly opened to show another receding hallway.

On cue, the door behind them buckled as the assassin virus attempted to break through.

"There's a teleportation pad over here," Joshua said. "Follow me."

Joshua led them to a small raised dais. "By the starry orb of the Anuinn," Joshua intoned.

The scene melted and they found themselves in a large room lit by the unearthly glow of massive coal-lit furnaces. The temperature of the room was stifling and even though it was only virtual reality, all three were drenched in perspiration within moments.

"We're now several levels below the virus," Joshua explained. "I think we have a few moments to consider a plan."

"What I want to know," Nebula said, "is if Panther is okay."

"Probably," Berek said. "The belts I've constructed are designed to take a good chunk of punishment away from you, but they can't absorb it all. If they detect an abnormal amount of damage when you are thrown out of the IntNNet they trigger a program in my computer which dials emergency services and directs them to your address.

"If Panther survived her encounter, she's most probably in an ambulance autodoc on the way to the hospital."

"Well, let's consider our alternatives," Nebula interrupted. "We could all jack out and turn this over to the authorities."

"No," Joshua said, shaking his head. "I think I have a plan."

"It had better be a good one," Nebula responded, "because our batting average pretty much lags about now."

Berek nodded his assent. "I'm willing to give yours a try,"

"Well, let's get this show on the road before our visitor finds us." Joshua walked into the middle of the room and shouted at the top of his lungs. "Grimbold! It is Izon of Bartas, your creator. Come!"

"A tad melodramatic isn't he?" Nebula whispered as an aside to Berek. Berek merely shrugged.

They could here the massive shuffling of feet when the giant Cyclops lumbered into the room. Blinking stupidly out of one oversized eye he slowly shuffled from one foot to the other. Drool oozed out of its open mouth and puddled on the floor.

"This gentleman," Joshua said, motioning toward the Cyclops, "is the ticket to buy us valuable time to get my master plan set up. I am hoping that "

With a groan, the ceiling collapsed. Gray ooze flooded over the rubble of the huge granite blocks and one pseudopod whipped out and wrapped itself around Nebula.

Screaming in agony, he was lifted up and thrust deep into the pulsating mass. Once again, there was a muffled implosion and the bitter reek of ozone.

"Grimbold!" Joshua yelled. "Kill!"

With a roar the Cyclops leapt onto the thing that had followed them and began to rip apart pseudopods as quickly as they sprouted. Within seconds, the Cyclops was engulfed.

Too horrified to talk, Joshua grabbed Berek's arm and half-dragged him toward an open door. They ran through corridors of ancient rock that towered above them until the ceiling itself was lost in the murky darkness.

"Berek," Joshua yelled breathlessly as they ran. "I need just a few moments to set up the trap. Can you act as decoy?"

Berek nodded. Joshua turned at an intersection and entered a massive coliseum. In the middle, surrounded by thousands of rows of hewn stone seats, stood a podium with a bright blue flame. The flame danced over ten feet high and lit the arena with an unearthly azure light.

"Please," Joshua said. "Keep it here for just a few moments before you emergency disconnect. I just need a fraction of the time."

Bracing himself, Joshua started running for podium. Muttering an incantation, he leapt into the flame. Instead of heat, he felt his body expand into a mist as the surroundings evaporated. For what seemed moments, he hung in total darkness. Slowly, the darkness lifted to reveal a massive cavern filled with multicolored stalactites and other formations.

Without pausing, he fled down a corridor and stepped over what he knew was an important invisible line. Reality seemed to waver for a moment and then click together. Here the cavern seemed crude and strangely unfinished. Even the colors seemed diminished. Joshua smiled and waited.

He did not have long to wait. Hoping Berek had made a clean getaway, Joshua could hear the pursuit of a heavy body fleeing toward him. The ooze poured down the cavern corridor breaking away formations and columns in its mad rush to annihilate him.

It puddled before the entrance as if exhausted or puzzled.

"Come on!" Joshua cried. "Here I am! Come and get me!"

The blob merely sat quiescent. Joshua could feel the anger well up inside him. This thing had killed several of his friends and may have killed his last three companions. It was an affront to all the unspoken codes and mores that surrounded the IntNNet.

"I am Ancient Evil," Joshua yelled at the top of his lungs. "Fulfill your program!"

With blazing speed, before Joshua could yell for emergency disconnect, the thing surged into the room and whipped out a gelatinous arm. Seizing him around his waist, Joshua screamed in agony as he felt what must have been thousands of volts course through his body, despite Berek's virtual belt.

He felt himself jerked through the air and felt himself smashed into the blob's main body.

Screaming in pain, he woke with a jerk into normal reality.

Blood poured from his nose and ears and a red haze hindered his vision. His head felt as if it were trying split open.

He stumbled to his feet, his apartment seemed to reel about him, and then he fell flat on his face. Arms and legs barely obeying him, Joshua crawled toward the computer console.

He grabbed the electric plug of the computer and pulled it out of the wall socket with all his might.

When the paramedics arrived three minutes later, they found Joshua hugging a small thumb drive to his chest and laughing hysterically.

* * *

Twenty-four days later, Berek, Nebula and Joshua met in Joshua's real office. Panther was still in the hospital, but expected to make a full recovery and be released within a few days. Berek had successfully delayed SATS and had emergency disconnected with no penalty but a splitting headache. Nebula and Joshua, on the other hand, were in serious condition for several days from internal bleeding and synapse overload. Fortunately, they had made a complete recovery.

There were questions, but Joshua explained or to put it bluntly, lied, explaining the damage had been caused by an experimental hookup his company was developing. His insurance company was livid. Joshua didn't care.

He placed the thumb drive on his desk and patted it affectionately.

"When the assassin virus entered the cavern, it had to transfer its program from wherever it was to this thumb drive. When I entered reality, I basically turned off my computer and killed it while it was in my computer's RAM.

"However, its program is here. And not the small duplicate virus program that Berek has. I have the complete original."

"But what are you going to do with it?" Nebula asked. "It's an artificially intelligent monster. How do you know it won't turn on you like it did its original creators?"

"Because I'm aware of what it can do," Joshua responded. "I can reprogram it to be the ultimate game opponent, and the government will never challenge me about copyright infringement.

"I suspect," Joshua said laughing, "that we are going to fabulously wealthy courtesy of Uncle Sam."

Three glasses of champagne clicked together over the inactive thumb drive.

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